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Writing from Workshops

During the course of one workshop, we might laugh hysterically, shed tears, celebrate life's joys, mourn our losses... all in the space of a few hours. Participants write in a range of styles, voices and genres, continually surprising and inspiring each other with what emerges. The following pieces, all written in workshops in 20 minutes or less, give you a feeling for the writing that happens in the groups.


From The Bay
by Kim Taylor

In June 1946, Monterey, California suffered from an unending bout of fog. There was nothing particularly special about fog in June in Monterey. But this fog crept under door jambs and slid its way into closets. Clothes grew damp and then sullen and then defeated. Out on the bay, the foghorn sounded every five minutes, lowing like a sick cow. Even the ball game between Western Meat and Rowe Motor had been canceled, as visibility dropped to two inches in the fifth inning and nobody could find the ball.

Traffic accidents were up three-fold from the year before - but of course, a year before, the peninsula was nearly without men and traffic was light. So, statistically speaking, one couldn't blame the fog, but one could, if one were so disposed, blame the return of the men.

Along Ocean View Avenue and Fisherman's Wharf, the fog worked its way between the narrow alleys that led from the canneries to tiny bits of shoreline. It curled itself around the piers that pushed into the waters, and circled the hoppers out in the bay that had once swallowed tons of sardines. Most of the piers and the hoppers were useless now. Because right after Nagasaki, Monterey Bay ran out of steam. The sardines that fertilized a country and fed soldiers in two world wars and stunk up an entire community were gone. Into cans and into the ground. No sardines, no nothing. Only piles of bleached fish heads, bits of graying opalescent shell and buildings that yawned with boredom.


The big war - the Jap-killing, Kraut-hating, hero-making war - was really and truly over. As were rations for food and gas and rubber for tires. The men were home, some discharged after V-J Day, others now back from the Occupation. Most had wanted three simple things: a bar, their mother, and their girl. In 1945, dazed and victorious, they climbed the steep slopes of New Monterey, or hopped a bus to King City, or hitched a ride to Santa Maria. All the way, they smelled the food from their mother's kitchen, the same scent of cabbage or osso buco or fried clams they'd conjured up in trenches or pup tents or holes in the ground. All the way, as their feet went step by step up the steep cement sidewalk, or their backs and legs went numb from the rattle of the bus, they could feel the soft skin of cheeks and breasts and thighs of their girl, their sweetheart, their wife.

And the men's fingertips warmed and smiles went around and stories of what would happen when they were alone (with Daisy, Kelly, Margaret, Bea) grew and multiplied and became a song.

They were the returning warriors, and Penelope was waiting at home. The men shared pictures - crinkled, creased, torn at the edges. "That's my girl," they would say. And all the girls looked alike in that they were loved and remembered for an entire goddamn war. It didn't matter if the men were in the Battle of the Bulge or cooking stew in Texas. Didn't it matter if bombs made them shit their pants and letters from home made them cry. These men were heroes. And they knew there would be a parade and adulations and keys from the Mayor.

At least the first men back found most of this to be true. There were certainly parades, and a lot of keys to the city were handed out. And at least some of the girls hadn't married someone else. At least mom's cooking was the same.

But that was 1945, and everybody loved a hero.

If you came back later, it was something entirely else.

     Kim Taylor is the author of two YA novels, Cissy Funk (HarperCollins) and Bowery Girl (Viking). Cissy Funk was the recipient of the Willa Cather Award for Best Young Adult Novel. She is currently at work on The Bay, a mainstream novel, that follows a group of men and women making their way in the post-war world of 1946 Monterey, California. She hopes her agent will like it, even though he thinks she's dropped off the face of the earth.


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Chocolate Cake, by Nikki Monacelli

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